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Little lily
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Hej och välkomna till min lilla Fanfic!
Det är en sagan om ringen/ the hobbit baserad berättelse!
Den är på engelska.
Huvudperson: Erlizya
Handling: The dwarf's kingsom has been attaced by a dragon. They escaped to the Elf village and now they are going to find soldiers that can help them fight the dragon. 18 years old Erlizya wants to come with them. But her father says no.
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Tryck här för att visa!Kommer att lägga kapitlen i såna här!


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Tryck här för att visa!Chapter 1 "A dark shadow A dark man A dark being A dark knight" I close the book and put some more wood on the fireplace. Outside the window it's dark. I can here the dwarfs humming outside. Elf's don't usually like dwarfs but this is the Dwarf prince, his kingdom has been attacked of a dragon. He and some of his friends luckily escaped and came here. We couldn't say no. But these dwarfs was really nice. Not like they use to be, so we said they could stay longer than expected. I look outside again. This is their last night, tomorrow they are going to leave and search for a brave knights that can help them to over win the dragon. Some of our men are going with them. I wanted to follow them but dad said I couldn't because I'm a girl. Bullshit I think, but maybe he is right. Mom walks in to the room. "How are you?" She asks. "I'm fine..." "I'm sorry that you couldn't come with them, but it i a mans job." She looks a bit sad. "But It shouldn't be, mom, I have trained for this!" Then I realized what I said. She looks shocked. "You have what?" Then she looks at the ground again. "You are just.." "Just what?!" I higher my voice. "Just like me.." She say. I stair at her, her long hair shimmers in the light from the fire place. "Shall I tell you something?" I nod. "When I was at your age, i also wanted to be a warrior, but my father hindered me, he said I was to young and beautiful to fight, so I gave up my dreams." She give me a sad smile. "But you won't." I look at her, she is so beautiful. I will never look like her. "But, how?" I ask.


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Tryck här för att visa!Chapter 2 I stand behind the dwarf's cottage. The clock is barley 4 am and the sun is going up in an hour. Mom said they would leave buy then. I lid to the wall, and suddenly I fall asleep... Light and loud voices wake me up, the sunlight is spreading and I can hear foot steps. "THEY ARE LEVING!" It's now or never. I have to leave. I run in the woods. I don't want to be discoverd. I can here the dwarf's singing from very long distance. "The darkness turns to light. The moon goes down. Fire rise. We are one..." They go over to humming. I look up at the sky, it's afternoon. "We have walked for hours. When are we there?" "Shut up Bismo, you know the way to the humans!" "Yes, from home, but not from the Elf's." "It's not very lo..." KRACK. I look down at my foot. I stepped on a branch. "What was that?" I here the Prince say. Oh no. "It came from the woods!" I can here them come closer. "Hello!" Someone screams. "Hello!" I scream back. "It's a girl." "But what is she doing here?" One dwarf appear, than another. Soon it's dwarf's every where. "It's an elf!"


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Tryck här för att visa!Chapter 3

"NO!" Said Ragor, "you can't stay!"

"BUT PL..." I started. "I SAID NO." I'm quiet for a moment but after a while I say "You know it's to late to send me back." He growls. "Darn Elf's... Well well, you can come with us. But! You have to hide if we get into a fight, okay?" "Okay..." I say a bit disappointed.




Later, when i sit in my tent, a young dwarf comes in. "What do you want?" I say. "Hello, my name is Melodian, I saw youw swowd in the woods. It's a vewy powewful swowd, isn't it?" I nod. I have to bite my lips so that I won't laugh. "Can I see it?" I nod again and pulls out my sword from the belt. After two minuets of looking he gives it back. "Stunning." He says. "It's made fow an elf king, where did YOU get it?" "My mothew gave it to me. It was her fathers." "Youw mothew nows that you followed us?!" "Yes." He stairs at me. "At least my mother thought me that it was impolite to stair." He shakes his head. "Well, anyways, we could weally need that swowd. Tomowow night, a gwoup will seawch thwough a mountain pass. Follow us but don't let the othews see you! If we get into a fight, help us. Do you undewstand?" I think for a bit. "Yes."

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1 jun, 2013 13:19

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SKA dU SKRIVA EN FANFIC LIVVV

1 jun, 2013 13:25

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SKA dU SKRIVA EN FANFIC LIVVV
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1 jun, 2013 13:26

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SKA dU SKRIVA EN FANFIC LIVVV
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mysigt, kan läsa den när jag läst The Hobbit x)

1 jun, 2013 13:27

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SKA dU SKRIVA EN FANFIC LIVVV
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mysigt, kan läsa den när jag läst The Hobbit x)
nä läs den NUUUU!0

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1 jun, 2013 13:28

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SKA dU SKRIVA EN FANFIC LIVVV
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mysigt, kan läsa den när jag läst The Hobbit x)
nä läs den NUUUU!0
kommer inte fatta något x(

1 jun, 2013 13:29

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SKA dU SKRIVA EN FANFIC LIVVV
mm
mysigt, kan läsa den när jag läst The Hobbit x)
nä läs den NUUUU!0
kommer inte fatta något x(
Jo, jag förklara på kik, fråga om du inte förstå!

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1 jun, 2013 13:30

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LIV SKRIVER FANFIC DETTA SKA FIRA S

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1 jun, 2013 18:57

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LIV SKRIVER FANFIC DETTA SKA FIRA S
Hur?

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1 jun, 2013 19:19

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den här va en av de bästa fanfic:s/ar som jag läst, jag vill läsa mer ♥

1 jun, 2013 20:12

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