The Lost Heir of the House of Black
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MystiqueRed
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Titel: The Lost Heir of the House of Black
Språk: Engelska Rating: PG (för tillfället) Färdigskriven: Långt ifrån Handling: Berättelsen tar start när Sirius blir gripen, dagen efter hans dotter Isobel fötts, även samma dag som Lily och James Potter mördas. Sirius fru dör i barnsäng och lämnar Sirius med den nyfödda dottern. Lyckan blir som sagt inte långvarig då Sirius slits ifrån dottern och lämnar henne ensam. Eftersom att Isobel nu inte har någon annan blir hon adopterad av Arthur och Molly Weasley och blir uppfostrad i deras hushåll, utan att veta vem hon egentligen är. 11 år senare är det hennes tur att börja på Hogwarts tillsammans med sin "tvillingbror" Ron och kanske där får hon reda på svaren på gåtorna hon haft i hela sitt liv, exempelvis vem hennes riktiga föräldrar är... En annan mörk hemlighet är att hon är barnbarn till Tom Riddle. Är det verkligen för Harry Potters skull som han försöker återvända till Hogwarts? Snabb info från författaren: Jag kommer börja att ladda upp prologen med Sirius och sedan berättelsen ur Isobels point of view. Har tänkt att skriva om varje år på Hogwarts, men tar ett i taget, så att det blir 7-8 berättelser totalt. Har dock ej skrivit klart denna då jag studerar vid universitetet och har knappt tid med annat. Jag har valt att följa första boken, men även första filmen - en slags blandning beroende på vilket alternativ av händelse jag föredragit. Därför kommer ni att känna igen er sedan när ni kommer till Hogwarts med Isobel. Just a heads up Låter det intressant? Laddar upp prologen så snart jag får svar! (Då den inte får plats i detta inlägg) 15 sep, 2012 16:25
Detta inlägg ändrades senast 2013-07-18 kl. 23:13
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ItsWayPastMyBedTime
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Jag vill läsa!! Låter ju jättebra! :o
Sirius Black ♥ 15 sep, 2012 16:35 |
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MystiqueRed
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Ursäkta för eventuella stavfel/ett talsträck för lite, hoppas ni gillar det ändå!
The Prologue - October 31, 1980 - You’re beautiful, you know that right? -What? Her laugh sounded just like an angel. He truly loved her laugh. -I don’t think I’ve ever seen you this happy before. It’s like you glow more and more by each day. -Well, Sirius, I am happy. I’ve got you - and soon... She stroke her big belly. -... she’ll be here as well. Then I’ll be the luckiest human being in the whole world. -Looks like she’ll be here any day now. Sirius smiled and kneeled down to kiss the belly. He put his hands on it to feel his unborn daughter kick back. -She’s got so much energy for being so small! It’s amazing! -You can say that, but you don’t have to sleep with this feisty little lady inside of you. It’s like she’s a creature of the night, that’s when she’s active at the most. I hardly get any sleep anymore. But, I love her still. So much. Can’t wait to meet her. -Then our family will be completed. -It’ll be perfect. Sirius stared into her eyes. -I love you, Lizzie. I really do. Elizabeth smiled back at him, reached for his neck and pulled him up so that she could reach his lips. The romantic kiss lasted for a while, then Sirius sat down next to her and put his arm around her. Soon his embrace would put her to sleep. Sirius stared into the fireplace a few feet from them. It was so pleasurable to watch the flames play with each other. Once again he put his hand on Lizzie’s belly, and as he thought - his hand was met by a little kick. -So, you’re still up, little girl? He laughed quietly. Was it possible to being able to love someone you’ve never met? ”I’m the luckiest guy in the world” he thought and closed his eyes and soon they both snored in harmony. -Sirius! Sirius opened his eyes. -Sirius, she’s coming! We have to go now! It all happened so fast. While Lizzie tried to put a coat on, Sirius wrote a quick note and gave it to their owl Melvin to give to his friend Peter Pettigrew. In the note, he explained that Peter would have to take over the quest to keep their common friends James and Lily Potter safe by re-locating their whereabouts. He didn’t have time to recommend a place. ”Just keep them safe”, he wrote at the end of the note. He took Lizzie’s hand and went for the -door. Suddenly, Lizzie stopped. -What’s the matter?! -Something’s wrong, Sirius. Really wrong! Lizzie groaned with pain. Sirius panicked, took her in his arms and apparated to the closest hospital. A muggle hospital. -Sirius. Lizzie whispered and fainted. The apparation was too much for her. Sirius carried her inside and screamed for help. Sirius held Lizzie’s hand during the doctor’s check of her. The doctor’s were all around her, and they all spoke at the same time. But Sirius wouldn’t hear them. He was too focused on Lizzie who stared back into his big, black eyes. Suddenly she started so scream. One of the doctor’s got Sirius attention. -We have to do a caesarean section on your wife. He said calmly. -A what? Sirius was not in common with muggle terms. -A caesarean section, or she might not make it. Neither will the baby. Sirius didn’t know what to do. His heart had never been beating so hard and fast before. It felt like it was going to explode. -We have to open Elizabeth’s stomach to save her and your daughter’s lives, Mr Black. A nurse explained to him when she noticed his panicked and confused eyes. -”Open”? Never! -DO IT! Lizzie screamed. You have to save her! Save my baby! The doctor’s started to prepare the operation. -Sirius, if I don’t make it... -Don’t say that! Sirius eyes started watering. -Sirius! If I don’t make it you have to promise me you’ll take care of her! Take care of our baby! Their grip of each other was so strong, their hands started to shake. -I... I... Sirius tried to utter a word. Tears started to run down his cheek. -Sirius, take care of her. All right? Be the great father I know you are! -I will, he replied quietly. One of the doctor’s gave her a sedative. -Promise you’ll take care of her. Lizzie’s eyes got tired and her voice started to fade away. -You have to take care of Isobel for me! I love you, Siri... she feel asleep. -We have to start now, Mr Black. I suggest you go outside. Sirius kissed Lizzie’s forehead and was followed outside by one of the nurse’s. He had to sit down in one of the waiting-seats so that he wouldn’t faint. -Isobel. He whispered. He put his face in his hands and started to cry. After a few hours one of the doctor’s came out of the room. There was blood all over his clothes. He had a sad look in his eyes, but still he was very calm. -Mr Black? He put his hand on Sirius’ shoulder. Sirius looked up, too tired to response. -I’m... I’m sorry, Mr Black. But we couldn’t save her. Her body was to weak. -What? Sirius replied and raised his eyebrows. -I’m sorry but... Elizabeth’s dead. The doctor looked straight into his eyes. Sirius stood up. -What did you say? -I know it must be hard for you to hear... but listen... -No... no... NO! Sirius screamed while trying to get past the doctor. Several passing doctor’s stopped to hold him back. -Elizabeth! Sirius screamed her name several times. One of the nurse’s came out and slapped his face, then gave him a sedative to calm down. -Calm down, Mr Black! I’m sorry for hitting you, but we have good news as well. We manage to save your daughter. Sirius didn’t hear her, the sedative was too strong and soon he didn’t have the strength to stand. They laid him down in one of the rooms. The next few hours was like a living nightmare. He wasn’t awake, but he wasn’t sleeping. He was thinking about what just happened, yet he was too calm to react on his emotions. The next morning he opened his eyes. The sun shine right into his eyes. He heard a noise, it was one of the nurse’s who just entered the room. -How are you feeling, Mr Black? -How do you think? Sirius tried to sit up straight. -Do you remember what I told you before I gave you the sedative? The nurse’s voice was calm and friendly. Sirius looked into her eyes. -I just remember Elizabeth. Sirius replied. His heart started to ache. -Well, Mr Black. I am terribly sorry for your loss. But you have to regain your strength. You’re a father for crying out loud. -What? The nurse shook her head. -That’s what I told you last night! We managed to save your baby girl! She’s alive and she’s beautiful. -Would you like to meet her? Sirius’ eyes started to tear up again. She took his hand and followed him down the next level and into the second room on the left. There was another nurse inside. -Should he really meet her in this state? She said and gave Sirius a case of the stink eye. Sirius wondered how loud he must’ve been in the corridor the previous night. But he didn’t care. -Oh shut up, of course he have to! The nurse replied. -But what if he can’t behave himself? Sirius stood at the doorway, unable to move. The nurse that he knew looked back at him and smiled. -He will. Sirius head was spinning. The nurse let go of his hand and went behind the other nurse to pick up something in a pink blanket. -This, Mr Black... Is your daughter. Sirius’ head stopped spinning the moment he laid his eyes on her. She was asleep. -Would you like to hold her? Sirius nodded. -Maybe you want to sit down? Sirius left the safety of standing in the doorway, and sat down at once. The nurse smiled and walked up to him. He pulled out his arms to take to baby. It was an amazing feeling. The nurse smiled. Sirius looked down on his daughter and felt the warmth she was emanating. -Hi Isobel. I’m your father. -You’re gonna name her Isobel? Sirius nodded. -That was her mother’s last wish. -Yeah, she looks like an Isobel! Sirius eyes started to fill up with tears. It was like a stone disappearing from his chest. He could breathe again. Isobel opened her eyes and looked up with her big, black eyes on her father. -Isobel. Sirius whispered. The baby stared at him. She gave away a cough. Sirius smiled. The baby tried to move and for a split second, it looked like she was smiling back at him. -I will take care of you, I promise! Sirius leaned his head forward and kissed her forehead. They could leave the hospital the next day, after writing some muggle paperwork. Sirius didn’t know how to feel. He was empty. But somehow, he still had some strength left. It was like Lizzie’s love filled his body with the energy he needed to keep on going. Back at Grimmaldplace 12 he took the sleeping Isobel into the doorway. -Here we are, baby girl. This is your new home. He went up the stairs and into the nursery that Lizzie had prepared during her pregnancy, it was the room next to his brother Regulus’ old bedroom. A room that he hadn’t touched since they moved back to the house. She had completed it just a few days before she... died. He put Isobel in the bed and stroke her little head. He went out and left the door on ajar. He wanted to be able to hear her if she woke up. Suddenly he had this weird feeling and looked downstairs to find out that there was people watching him. -Sirius Black? -Yeah? The men went upstairs towards him . -You’re under arrest for the murder of James and Lily Potter! -James and Lily are dead? Sirius felt sick. -And Peter Pettigrew! Someone added. -What? -Don’t act dumb, you filthy dog! They got a tight grip of him and took him downstairs. There was too many wizard’s to fight. -My baby! I have to see my daughter! -Like you have a baby... someone replied. At that time, the baby started to scream. Isobel’s voice echoed in the old house. -You really have a baby up there? Sirius tried to get out of the magic cuffs they just put on him. -I will make sure someone will take care of her during the meantime.. -Isobel! Sirius screamed. The baby’s scream became louder. They removed him from the house. Sirius continued to scream for his daughter. Isobel’s scream was the last thing he ever heard from that place. He never saw his baby girl again... 15 sep, 2012 16:45
Detta inlägg ändrades senast 2014-03-16 kl. 23:22
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AWESOME,google translate är verkligen inte bra med man förstog (kan inte engelska så jag använde translate)
15 sep, 2012 17:03 |
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MystiqueRed
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Skrivet av Borttagen: AWESOME,google translate är verkligen inte bra med man förstog (kan inte engelska så jag använde translate) Åh, tack Hoppas det inte är alltför svår engelska, jag försökte skriva så "enkelt" som möjligt för att få en bredare "publik" 15 sep, 2012 17:07 |
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ItsWayPastMyBedTime
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Jättebra!!
15 sep, 2012 18:34 |
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MystiqueRed
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15 sep, 2012 18:41 |
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ItsWayPastMyBedTime
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Seriöst, den var riktigt bra 15 sep, 2012 20:23 |
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Ngoch
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Instämmer med alla andra, det här var riktigt bra och jag är glad över att jag faktiskt förstod nästan varenda ord
15 sep, 2012 23:31 |
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MystiqueRed
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Skrivet av Ngoch: Instämmer med alla andra, det här var riktigt bra och jag är glad över att jag faktiskt förstod nästan varenda ord Taaack så mycket 15 sep, 2012 23:32 |
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