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Skrivet av Elin Lovegood:
helt underbart! Så bra när du skriver i ett annat perspektiv, då får man veta hur hon tänker också. Riktigt bra skrivet denna gång också

Tack så jättemycket

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Alltså jag tycker inte det är något problem för dig att få karaktärerna på det viset som jag föreställt mig efter JK's berättelse. Du gör det bra!
Men jag förstår också om det är svårt - mitt tips är nog att se videoklipp på Youtube om "The Mauraders Era", även om de inte säger något i videon så ser man liksom hur andra har tänkt sig att de var gentemot varandra! Svårt att förklara, men jag brukar få inspiration av klippen

Jag vill gärna läsa mer ur Ross, Ali, Snape och Remus perspektiv ♥ Men du är jätte duktig i varje fall!


Tack, visste inte att det fanns klipp? SKa kolla det ^^♥

Jo, det finns det, och dessa är mina favoriter om just marodörerna! ;3♥
Länk 1 || Länk 2

Tack, ska kolla på dem ♥ Jag är blir jätteglad och är tacksam över all hjälp♥
Ni är bäst!

Vi vill ju ha mer av den bästa historien ever, ya know!
DU ÄR BÄST!

Fast ni är bättre, vet ni! Ni får mig att känna mig speciell i allt det här folk kallar liv

Men du är allra bäst!
Du är speciell, det är otroligt få som kan skriva så här bra! Är totalt fast i din berättelse

Aww♥ Nee du äää!

CHAPTER 12!
Remus pov~
She had been so beautiful that night. I had not been able to let her go. When she had touched me had a shiver went through my body and I had an impulse to kiss her. Never before had I felt such a thing, so strong. I shake off the thought.
"What are you thinking about Moony?" James ask teasingly. I bite me hard on the inside of the cheek.
"Some hot chick?" Sirius grins and pushes me easily . I smack irritated with my tongue.
"Forget it, Padfoot. Then he had hardly looked like he tasted dragon dung" laughs James.
"Jeez, why am I even friends with you" I nuts and dive into the book again.
"Did you?" Sirius asks with wide eyes.
"Why do you care?" I rumbles and continue try to read.
"He did it! Moony's in love!" James burst out.
"No. In that case, if I were, I can not let anyone into that danger" I say sharply, looking angrily at them. How many times do I have to explain it?
"Moony's in love!" Repeats James puzzled .
"And why not, I mean, this girl should after all get a chance to choose" says Sirius, ignoring James. I sigh.
"No, she will run when I tell her" I say bitterly and dive into the book again, I hope that the conversation is over.
"Wouldn't you help Allison study now?" Peter asks quietly. I jerk.
"Shoot, I forgot that" I say and fly up. "Erm, I'll see you later" Then I rush out to the library. I had completely forgotten that Allison wanted help today. Just hope she's not gone. I hurry in and see her sitting at a table. She looks down at the table and have her lips firmly pressed together.
"Sorry, I lost time" I say apologetically and sit down across from her. She looks up. Her dull eyes are full of sorrow and her face is white with a film of sweat. She shakes her head quickly, letting her dark hair falling in front of her face.
"Is everything okay? We can take this another time if you want... " I say and frowns. She jerk when someone nearby drops a book on the floor, and then being chased out of the librarian. She look nervously around.
"No, it's okay... I've only slept badly" she says and packs up her books. I hear that she is lying, but I decide to pretend like nothing, even if I feel a little worried. She looks like she might faint on the spot.
"Can we start with the transfiguration?" She asks.
"You choose" I nod and pull out my books.

min profilbild är phil lester för han är very cute, ok

11 nov, 2013 17:33

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OMG SÅ JÄKLA BRA!
Är bokstavligen helt jäkla död nu...
Är det Allison Remus gillar - eller är det någon annan? :3 JAG BEHÖVER SVAR! PANIKKKK!!!!


Skriv mer snart, okej? Okej! BRA!
DU ÄR BÄÄÄÄÄÄST!!!! ♥

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11 nov, 2013 20:06

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OMG SÅ JÄKLA BRA!
Är bokstavligen helt jäkla död nu...
Är det Allison Remus gillar - eller är det någon annan? :3 JAG BEHÖVER SVAR! PANIKKKK!!!!


Skriv mer snart, okej? Okej! BRA!
DU ÄR BÄÄÄÄÄÄST!!!! ♥

Moahahaha >.< Det får du väl se

Du är ju bäst♥ Att du ens orkar läsa min ff :O
Tänkte avslöja så lite som möjligt nu men, ni borde längta tills nästa fullmåne ^^♥

min profilbild är phil lester för han är very cute, ok

11 nov, 2013 20:09

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OMG SÅ JÄKLA BRA!
Är bokstavligen helt jäkla död nu...
Är det Allison Remus gillar - eller är det någon annan? :3 JAG BEHÖVER SVAR! PANIKKKK!!!!


Skriv mer snart, okej? Okej! BRA!
DU ÄR BÄÄÄÄÄÄST!!!! ♥

Moahahaha >.< Det får du väl se

Du är ju bäst♥ Att du ens orkar läsa min ff :O
Tänkte avslöja så lite som möjligt nu men, ni borde längta tills nästa fullmåne ^^♥

OH BOJ! KAN INTE VÄNTA!!! D:
Du är ju bäst!♥ Din FF äger så grymt mycket!
FULLMÅNE WIIIIIII!!!!

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11 nov, 2013 20:19

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Bara för din skull kära kanelpumpa

CHAPTER 13!
An hour later we had finished study, and with a tired smile on my face, I hurry up to the hospital wing.
"Madam Pomfrey?" I ask quietly. She comes up to me and examine me. I clears my throat.
"It happened a little accident" I say, and lift up my clothing and to expose a large flesh wound that goes over my stomach.
"Sit on the bed over there... get ... heal" she says and walk away to a cabinet. If she only knew how things really stood. I wipe my forehead to remove the layer of sweat."Drink this" says Pomfrey who now come back, with a bottle with blue liquid in. It tastes cold on the tongue, like ice, but burns in the throat. I shudder and feel how my eyes fill with tears. She lifts up my robe then she let it down again. The wound had already begun to heal.
"There you go. You should just be able to leave the wing, but be careful, it still heals!" She calls and walk away again. I nod and walk quickly towards our room. Quiet, I hope to avoid being questioned by Lily, Alice or worse, Ross. She may hate me now, but if she saw me like this, she would probably ask me what's wrong. The expression on Remus' face when he showed says that I probably look like crap. I don't know why I didn't go to the hospital wing, or at least showered first. I sigh and locks the door to the bathroom, that are connected with the girls' dorm, and undress me. The clothes had take very little damage. They would look as usual with a few simple spells. When I step into the shower, I met by warm water that gets my tense body to soften, and the floor drains with dirty water mixed with blood. I wrinkle my nose in disgust and soaping an extra layer of coconut soap I got from mom before I went to Hogwarts, then after washing it off I swaddle myself in a soft towel and looking into the mirror. I definitely looked better now, it's just the dark circles under the eyes that reveal me. Well, that would a layer of makeup remove. I take out a clean pajamas. I will definitely not be able to go up any more. When I've put on my pajamas I crawl into bed and takes out the necklace I have around my neck. I open it slowly. On one side is a picture of me and Ross hugging each other and laughing. On the other side it is a text. ~True friendship never ends~

min profilbild är phil lester för han är very cute, ok

11 nov, 2013 20:51

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PERFEKT!!!! SÅ BRAAA!!!
Men vad har hänt med Alli????? :O♥

MORE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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11 nov, 2013 20:55

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så himla bra! Älskade kapitlet ur Remus's perspektiv det var helt underbart och detta senaste var super bra det också.
Väntar spänt på fortsättningen vill veta vad som pågår med Alli!

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12 nov, 2013 17:27

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Sorry att jag inte uppdaterat för er som..., väntar (om det finns några..) Jag har idétorka och har försökt skriva men kommer inte på något... sorry♥

Kort kapitel Förlåt om jag hoppar i tiden men det kommer inte hända så mycket emellanåt

CHAPTER 14
Slowly I open my eyes. It was over a week since the attack, which I choose to think as little as possible on. The more I think about it, the less sense it seems. Me and Ross have not talked to each other properly yet. I decide finally to wake the others clear my thoughts. Nothing would ruin this day, not even a few pathetic things that happened a few weeks ago.
"Good morning Lily. Good morning Alice" I smile and get up. Lily rubs her eyes and sits up while Alice turns around and continues to sleep. I giggle.
"Why such a good mood?" Lily asks and stops a yawn with her hand. I smile.
"I don't know" I say, shrug and goes into the bathroom. Quickly I pull on my weekend clothes and try to brush through my today unruly hair.
"Wake up Alice. We're going to Hogsmead today" I hear Lily say outside the door and I freeze. Hogsmead? Today? You can't go without permition slip and it was impossible because my parents did not live nearby, plus they're about the same age as me, don't know each other, and least of all know who I am. I sigh and look for a solution. Although I did not go, so would Ross not get to go... Maybe I should talk to her? I open the door and see Lily waiting with her ​​white dress and her hair in a ponytail. Alice, who's only half-dressed, give me a smile. I smile sadly.
"Girls, I can't go to Hogsmead, cause I don't got a permission slip... "I start amd drag a hand through my hair as a habit.
"Oh... I can stay?" Lily says, looking sad towards me. I shake my head.
"No, go and have fun guys. I'll be fine" I insures them.
"Really? We can stay..." Alice says, but does not look quite as confident as Lily.
"Alice, you have a date with Frank today" I reminds her. She shrugs.
"Everything for friends. Are you sure, then?" She asks again. I nod and smile more confident than I feel. This will definitely be a long day, and if I'll talk to Ross, maybe a little fight will happen...

min profilbild är phil lester för han är very cute, ok

15 nov, 2013 16:44

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Har varit osocial ett tag här - men GUD så bra!
MOOOOOOOOREEEE!!!!!
Den här tråden är den jag alltid kollar först - just so you know ;3

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16 nov, 2013 21:42

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Braaa! Eller inte bra, SUPERBRA!

Jag vill läsa meeer!

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17 nov, 2013 15:20

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