James Potter and the Reversed Time-Turner

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Tack.

As they walked down the corridor, they heard someone shouting at them from behind. James recognized the voice of that Malfoy kid who had been talking to him the day before, and right behind him was two other guys, both of them were very big and looked like big, stupied bullies.
“Hey Potter!”
“Oh Harry, ignore him. He’s not worth it,” said Hermione quickly and grabbed Harry’s arm to stop him from doing something he might regret. What she didn’t do, however, was to stop James - who also had the name Potter. James turned around on his heel and faced Malfoy.
“What?” he spat. Malfoy seemed to be a bit taked aback, but he recovered fast.
“And who exactly are you?”
“I’m James Potter, and you?” snapped James.
“Draco Malfoy,” His eyed narrowed. “What are you doing here?”
“I’m here to visit my cousin, any problems?”
“So you’re that weird guy that walked into our Potions class yesterday?”
“Yeah,” James nodded took out his wand nonchalantly. Malfoy’s eyes narrowed.
“Are you going to hex me or something?”
“Not if you leave me alone...” James smirked at Malfoy who took out his wand as well.
“Excuse me, Potter, but do you think it’s such a good idea to get in trouble your first day here?”
James turned around and saw Snape.
“Oh, you know me, all of my ideas are good ideas,” said James and grinned big. Snape snorted.
“That’s not funny,” he said.

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Jag har väldigt lite inspiration (idéer vore inte fel!) just nu och det går väldigt långsamt att skriva. Har skrapat ihop några meningar, men det räcker knappats till ett helt inlägg. Tyvärr.

okej men jag har inga bra idéer... en grej man kan göra är att byta perspektiv i typ ett inlägg. Det kan vara lättare ibland. Men jag vet inte.