James Potter and the Reversed Time-Turner

Din fanfic är väldigt bra :3

Haha tack Kenni, du vet ju inte alls vad som händer sen och till och med hur det blir vid jul nej nej.

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Igen!

Jag tror du satte in ett stycke två gånger, men annars jättebra

Fy vad dumt, jag ändrade det genast! Tack!

Den är jätte bra!

Super som vanligt 83 Mer?

Nu kommer ett extra långt inlägg så kanske det inte blir så mkt imorgon istället, men jag kunde inte med att dela upp det här. :3

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James sat up in his bed and listened to hear if anybody else was awake. When he didn’t hear anything, he stood up and looked in his pyjamas-pocket. The little mirror that he had found inside his school robe’s pocket laid there, and James picked it up. He stared at his own reflection and whispered Sirius’ name a few times. Suddenly, another face shoved up in the mirror. The face belonged to a man who looked like he was around 35 years old. James couldn’t help it but felt a little disappointed. He had thought that the younger Sirius would appear, but when he thought about it he decided that an old Sirius was better than no Sirius at all.
“James?” Sirius asked disbelieving.
“Yeah, you heard right Padfoot, it’s me!” James said in a loud whisper. He started to walk out of the boys’ dorm down to the Gryffindor Common room to sit in one of the armchairs in front of the fireplace. “I have traveled to the future, using that weird necklace you took from a Hufflepuff during our fifth year...”
“Where are you right now? I can come and get you, if you want to...” Sirius began but got interrupted by James.
“Padfoot, I’m fine. I’m at Hogwarts, and my son Harry is here too! No need to worry, mate. We’re coming to you at Christmas. Do you have Moony there? I want to talk to him, since he’s my best friend, too,”
“Of course, wait a second...” James could see how Sirius turned away from the mirror. “MOONY!” he shouted. “I have a surprise for you,” he winked at James.
“I’m coming, Sirius,” said a tired voice and James could hear the steps as he stepped inside the room.
“Look in this mirror. Look who it is!” explained Sirius. James saw the face of another man, and this one looked a lot more older than the 35 years he really was. He had some scars right across his face and he looked really tired. His sand-colored, blond hair was in a mess but when he saw James’ face looking back at him in the mirror he loose up.
“Prongs!” he said shocked and James laughed.
“Hi Moony, good to see you,”
“Is that you? Oh my God, you’re a teenenger! What have happened?”
“He’s at Hogwarts, and he has traveled through the time!” Sirius explained.
“And you believe him?” Remus started to whisper to Sirius, but James could heir hon anyway. “He could be a Death Eater, Padfoot, I’m not so sure about this...”
“But I am, just wait a little and we will notice,”
“Hey Moony,” James said, “You look tired. Why is that?” he pretended that he hadn’t hear what he had said to Sirius.
“I don’t know, could that be because it’s in the middle of the night?” Remus said sarcastically.
“How many days is left until the full moon?” James whispered. Sirius grinned widely.
“You see, Remus, it’s our James!” he said. Remus shook his head.
“I don’t know...” he whispered to Sirius and turned to face James again. “It’s two days left, no need to worry,”
“You know, Moony, if you don’t trust that this is me, just say that and I can prove it easily,” James frowned. “Just take the Marauder’s Map and look inside the Gryffindor Common room. I’m sitting in my favourite armchair in front of the fire, like always,”
Remus smiled kindly.
“The Marauder’s Map? Do you think that we have it here? No, you should know better. Harry has it, of course!”
“He has? That’s wonderful!” James laughed. “Well, I think that it’s only one other thing i could do, then,” he put down the mirror on the table in front of him and angled it so that Remus and Sirius could see what he was doing next. He grinned at them and transformed so that instead of a boy, was now a great stag. He walked around the room and transformed back to a big applause from Sirius.
“Welcome back, Prongs.” Remus said and smiled.

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Jag vet att det börjar bli lite tjatigt men det är det ända jag kan säga om det här

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