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*bravo* Love it Mer är alltid välkommet Du skriver verkligen fantastiskt så det är inte klokt! Men ett tips är att läsa igenom din text innan du publicerar den så det inte blir slarvfel och så.


Jo jag vet! Det är min telefon som är konstig så jag kan inte det... Det suger...XD Men jag ska fixa det nästa gång jag lånar mammas dator, lovar. Tack för förståelse.

Här kommer kapitel!

Chapter six - Christmas at the Potters

We got better friends for everyday, the four of us. I sat in the common room with James one evening before the
Fire place. It was the 1st of December, and the snow fell Downs outside the window. We were playing à game of Wizards chess. When it was James's turn he suddenly turned away from the chess board and caught my eye.
"Um... Lily?"
"Yes?"
"Well, I... I just wondered... If you maybe... I know that you already had plans for christmas," I was going to my cousins', "but I wondered if you
maybe wanted to come over the holidays..." I smiled.
"Really? Is it okay for Ginny and Ha- I mean your parents?"
"Um, yes, I sent a letter last week, got the answer just yesterday..."
"Oh, I would love to! I'll go and write letter to mum and dad right now! Can I use Hedwig?"
"Uh, sure."

Hedwig. That was James's owl. She was white like snow, and Harry named her Hedwig when he bought her to James. She looked like Harry's owl, she even had the same... personality... as her.
I took a quill and a piece of parchment and started to write to my parents.

Dear mum and dad,
I hope that you are okay. I certanly am. Anyway, I am writing to you about christmas. I know that we were supposed to go to my cousins', but James asked me if I could come over the holiday. And I really want to meet his parents. I still can't believe that he is actually Harry's son! Anyway, I hope you are fine, and that I can go. And yes, I am doing well in school.
Love,
Lily

We had a deal me and my parents, to train my english I would talk and write to them in english, and to be safe no one would find out about my real identity they would call me Lily.
I really wanted to go with James.

Next day...........................................

I sat with Scorpius, Rose and James in the Great Hall and ate breakfast when Hedwig returned.

"Hello Hedwig," James and I said, and gave her small pieces of toast before James took the letter off her leg.
"Here," he said and handed over the piece of parchment to me. I opened the letter and started to read.

Dear Lily,
We wanted to see you, but if you really want to you can go. Hope you are okay and that you will have fun while meeting Mr and Mrs Potter.
Love you,
from Mum and Dad.

I smiled.
"Yes!" I said to James.
"What?" he said and wrinkled his nose.
"Oh... My parents said it was okay for me to come to you over the holidays." He grinned.
"Great."


"Join the Dark Side, we have Light" -Wait, what?

29 jan, 2013 19:10

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Skrivet av Mikaela120:
*bravo* Love it Mer är alltid välkommet Du skriver verkligen fantastiskt så det är inte klokt! Men ett tips är att läsa igenom din text innan du publicerar den så det inte blir slarvfel och så.


Jo jag vet! Det är min telefon som är konstig så jag kan inte det... Det suger...XD Men jag ska fixa det nästa gång jag lånar mammas dator, lovar. Tack för förståelse.

Här kommer kapitel!

We got better friends for everyday, the four of us. I sat in the common room with James one evening before the
Fire place. It was the 1st of December, and the snow fell Downs outside the window. We were playing à game of Wizards chess. When it was James's turn he suddenly turned away from the chess board and caught my eye.
"Um... Lily?"
"Yes?"
"Well, I... I just wondered... If you maybe... I know that you already had plans for christmas," I was going to my cousins', "but I wondered if you maybe wanted to come over the holidays..." I smiled.

Ja, jag förstår

♥3 Nu vill jag inte vara tjatig men meeeer x)

29 jan, 2013 20:16

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Ja, jag lånade mammas mobil när jag skrev och den höll på att ladda ur...XD

Här kommer nytt kapitel i alla fallXD

*Christmas*

Chapter seven - The floo-powder network

It was the 20th of December, and James and I were supposed to use the floo-powder network from McGonagall's office, so was Scorpius and Rose. We walked to the statue and waited. McGonagall came from behind and made us all jump.
"The Order," she said and the statue moved and showed a long spiral staircase.
"Of the phoenix," I whispered. James turned to me with an expression on his face that showed: Not understanding.
"What?" I turned to him.
"Huh? Oh, nothing."
"Okay..."

Later in McGonagall's office.....................................

"Have you ever used floo-powder before?" James asked me. Rose turned to him.
"Well, of course she hasn't, she's muggleborn!" She then turned to me and said; "But you've read those books, you should know how to use it." It was not a question, it was a fact, but I nodded and said:
"Yes, you throw a handfull of powder in the fire, then you step in and scream the name of the place you're going to, you must speak very clearly. Oh, and elbows in of course!" I grinned.
"Right then. We're going to Godric's Hollow, nr 52."
"Okay."
McGonagall spoke for the first time.
"Maybe someone should go first to show you, just in case Miss Mihami."
"Yeah, you're probably right."

Rose said she could do it, and stood in the fire place while screaming "Nr 7, Grimmauld Place!" and disappeared in the fire.
"Malfoy Manor!" Scorpius yelled. Then it was James's turn.
"See ya!" he said before screaming; "Nr 52, Godric's Hollow!"
Then it was my turn.
"Good luck Miss Mihami," McGonagall said.
"Thanks... Professor."

"52, Godric's Hollow!" I yelled, and started to spin around, very fast. I closed my eyes.

I fell and landed on the floor, James grinned.
"Hello. You want some help?"
"No, I'm fine," I snapped and stood up while brushing the ashes of my clothes.
"Yeah, sure..." He laughed.

"James? Is that you?" a woman called from upstairs.
"Yes mum, who else?" he answered and shook his head. He then turned to me and said in a low voice so only I would hear; "Mum. She's too scared all the time. She still thinks a Death Eater will knock on the door any time!" Ginny came down the stairs with Harry and two other kids, a boy and a girl, who I understood must be Albus and Lily... Potter. The Man had a scar above his round glasses. The woman - Ginny - had ginger hair.
"Hello!" she said and gave him a hug.
"Hi mum."
"Hello James!" said Albus.
"Hi Albus, Lily."
"James!" said Harry and hugged him. No one seemed to notice me at first, but then Harry held out his hand.
"Hello. You must be Lily. I'm Harry.."
"Hello, Mr Potter."
"You can call me Harry."
"And I'm Ginny."
"Hi." Harry looked at the two younger children. "Albus, Lily."
"Hi I'm Al."
"Hi I'm Lily... Potter."
"Well, I'm Lily Mihami."
"Hi." Ginny turned to Lily (Potter).
"Now show our guest to your room."
"Yes mum."

At dinner....................................................

"We're going to the burrow at christmas," James said. "Rose, Hugo, Fred, Roxanne, Victoire, Louis and Dominique will come too."
"Oh, great!"

I loved the Potters, and I could not wait to meet the other Weasleys. I knew even then that this would be the best christmas of my life. Well, until that point at least.

"Join the Dark Side, we have Light" -Wait, what?

30 jan, 2013 08:21

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kapitlen är jättebra!

30 jan, 2013 14:03

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Tummen upp!

30 jan, 2013 16:43

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Här kommer ett nytt kapitel!

Chapter eight - The Burrow

I stepped out of the fire place at the Burrow, Harry, Ginny and Lily had already used the floo powder-network, and only seconds after my appearance James turned up in the fire place, and Molly hugged him tightly.
"Oh, hello dear! Oh my, you've grown! I can still remember when your parents were in your age - oh, hello Albus!" she then said when Al turned up. It was the 24th of December, and later we would put the christmas tree at its right place. But that could wait for the evening. It was only eleven. Then Mrs Weasley - sorry, I mean Molly, Hermione is technically the new Mrs Weasley now - turned to me.
"And you are?"
"Oh, hello Mrs. Weasley, um, I'm Lily Mihami." I could not help but call her that.
She smiled.
"Oh dear, you can call me Molly," she said and hugged me like we had known each other ever since.
"And uh, I'm Arthur." Arthur said and held out his hand. I took it and said; "Hello. I'm Lily, sir. Pleased to meet you!"
"Well, pleased to meet you too."

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"Mum, when are the others coming?" James asked Ginny for the hundred time.
"James, I told you two minutes ago that they're coming soon."
"Yes, but when?"
"They should come any minute no-" the fire in the fire place suddenley turned green, and out came Rose.
"Rose!" James and I said at exactly the same time, ran towards her and hugged her. Then Albus and Lily - I should call her Lily Potter - hugged her too, and then a woman voice was heard behind us, and we turned around.
"Sorry we're late. Dear Ronald couldn't find his shirt."
"Well, it wasn't easy when dear Crookshanks ran away with my shirt on his back!" Harry laughed. "You two haven't changed since school at all!"

Behind the two grown-ups, who were now laughing, stood a boy in Lily's - I mean, in Lily Potter's age, with dark red hair, fuzzy, like a younger boy-version of Rose. Hermione then turned to me.
"You must be Lily. It's a pleasure to meet you."
"And you- you're Hermione! Um, I mean, um, sorry, uh, I'm Lily Mihami, yes, it's a great pleasure to meet you too."
"And I'm Ron Weasley, the master of Chess!" Hermione slapped him slightly over the arm. "Ron!"
"What? It's true!" She rolled her eyes.
"Hello Ron, I'm Lily Mihami. And I don't doubt that you're a master at chess, I've read about you, no one's ever beat you in a game of chess, is that correct?"
"It is!" he said before turning to Hermione and saying; "See! Even an eleven-year-old girl who I haven't even met before Thinks I'M the MASTER!"
"Oh my..." She rolled her eyes again and then turned to me.
"Don't care about him. He's always like that."
"I don't care."

After a while I turned to the younger boy, still hiding behind his father's legs.
"And you must be Hugo?" He did not answer. Hermione pushed him away from Ron and made him stand in front of her.
"Come on, Hugo. Answer her now."
"Yes."
"It's nice to meet you."

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Later that evening we were sitting in Ron's old room were the boys where now sleeping, only James and I.
"James. Can't we ask if Scorp can come?"
"Why?"
"Well, Think of what he said before christmas..."

"So, we'll se each other after christmas then," James said. "What will you do for christmas? You'll do anything fun?" Scorpius smile vanished. "No. 'Know how mum and dad is... Bet the only thing they'll do is yell at me, maybe even hit me because I got into Gryffindor. Well at least my mum."

James eyebrows turned down and made a wrinkle between that he always got when he was anxious.
"Oh, I've... Tried to avoid thinking about that..."
"Well, what do you think?"
"Well, at least we can try." The conversation turned over to an other subject, and the darker the sky outside the window got, the more tired I got.

Scorpius Synvinkel.......................

"Gryffindor! You're a shame for the purebloods, at least the GOOD ones!" How could you? You - you're so selfish, you-"
"Well, he's not selfish, he wasn't asking for this-"
"Not selfish, no-! Of course he is, I'm sure he begged to come in Gryffindor!" My mum yelled at me, she kept yelling at me even if dad was trying to calm her down. But I did not listen anymore.

"Slytherin's the house for purebloods! And then, you're befriending Potter, and Weasley, and like that isn't enough you're friends with a muggleborned witch, muggleborned! After all my tries to get you understand, and- ... You... Are... Not... My... SON!!!!" I felt a heat at my cheek, and a very big pain, and I understood that she had hit me. Hard. I felt tears coming up in my eyes, starting running down my cheeks.

Draco Malfoy, my father, stood where he stood, like frozen. But then, suddenly he seemed to understand what had just happened, and ran towards me, stopped in front of me, with the back towards me and screamed "ENOUGH!" I had never seen him this angry before. "ARE YOU CRAZY?! HE'S ONLY A CHILD! YOU'RE MAD! YOU'RE-" But I did not hear what he said, because I started to run, I ran up the stairs and towards my room, angry, scared, but most of all... I felt wounded, I felt a pain in my chest that had nothing to do with the running.

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"Scorpius?" My dad opened the door and walked in. "Are you okay, dear?" I nodded and turned around.
"Scorpius, it's okay, you've done nothing wrong. Your mother is just..."
"She hates me."
"No, she doesn't hate you..."
"Yes, she does." I turned around and caught his eye. I felt tears running down my face again when I spoke; "She wish I wasn't her son. And if she doesn't want to..." I looked him in the eye, and I felt an anger growing inside me. "I won't be either."
"Oh Scorp..." He closed the door, walked to my bed where I sat and hugged me tightly. I hugged him back, and cried, for the first time in my life - I always went to my mum if I was sad when I was younger-, on his shoulder, and it felt good to let all my feelings out.



ÅH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jag tycker så synd om Scorpius! Vi får se hur det går efter jul. Men innan det måste vi ju se hur julen blir för mig (Lily), Potters och Weasleys! Vi hörs!

"Join the Dark Side, we have Light" -Wait, what?

1 feb, 2013 18:04

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bra!

1 feb, 2013 19:15

Lily Mihami
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Tack! Kan avslöja att jag har planerat hela månaden för julkapitlet. Kan även avslöja att James kommer att lära Lily att flyga. Men det kommer ske en liten olycka, ganska läskig för två elvaåringar som aldrig skadats mer än skrubbsår på armbågar och knän förut... Ja, ja, jag kan inte avslöja hela kapitlet (har det i huvudet ungefär som det kommer att vara), så jag slutar nu! Men du får gärna skriva fler kommentarer, för jag fortsätter vara inloggad ett tag (typ en timme).

"Join the Dark Side, we have Light" -Wait, what?

1 feb, 2013 19:21

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okej,
det kommer säkert bli super, lika som de andra!

1 feb, 2013 19:24

Lily Mihami
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Tack, vad glad jag blir! Du anar inte hur mycket det betyder för mig! Har alltid tyckt (och tycker typ fortfarande) att jag är dålig på ALLTING, så det glädjer mig verkligen att du gillar det jag skriver.

"Join the Dark Side, we have Light" -Wait, what?

1 feb, 2013 19:27

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