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Lily Mihami
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Din ff är superbra och jag bevakar stenhårt!

Notis: det finns redan en ff med namnet "Inte som det verkar", fast du kanske inte visste det...

Tack!! Jo, jag vet att det finns det, men jag hade liksom inte något bättre namn på den... Det finns en anledning till namnet, vilket man kommer förstå mer av senare...
PS. Not as it seems lät ju inte så bra...

Här kommer ett kapitel! Jag skulle lagt upp det här för flera dagar, veckor, sen, men jag hittar inte detta kapitel... Men jag orkar inte vänta, så nu skriver jag det som jag minns det, + fortsättnig (för kapitlet blev aldrig klart...)
Nu kör vi!

Chapter 15 - Morning In the Library

"I Think I've found something!"
Rose threw a book lightly at the table in front of the boys.
"I Think I've found something too!" I said and turned away from the Bookshelf, gave James the book I was holding, took two more books and sat down on a chair next to Rose. James opened the book I had given to him and Scorpius took one of the books I put on the table and we all went into a trance, every one concentrating so hardly on what we were reading that the book shelf behind us could have fallen down without us noticing a thing.

We were sitting in the library, looking for information about how to become an animagus... It was 10 o' Clock on a saturday morning, in the spring... The 22d of Mars to be precise. It had been almost Three months since the flying incident in the Burrow. I had not seen my parents at all the entire year so far... Or my muggle friends... I miss them... Alot...

"Here! Instructions!"

Scorp's voice picked on my bubble and took me back to reality.
"What, where?" I looked at him and the book.
"Right here!" He said and pointed.
"Oh my god! This is..." said Rose, but I didn't hear the rest, because James shouted loudly: "Oh my... Bloody hell! This is... this is frickin' damn perfect! We all started to discuss about how cool it was, so loudly, that we didn't hear the steps behind us.
"This is a library, not a playground! And no swears in here!" Madame Pince stood behind us, with a devilish glare in her eyes.

"Sorry.." we said at the same time and she shook her head and sighed. Then she gave me and Rose a disappointed look, we were usually two of the most quiet ones in the library...

We started discussing about where we would be able to practice, whispering this time, so that no one would hear what we were talking about.

"I know," I said, "have your parents ever told you about the Room of Requirement, or most often referred to as the come-and-go-room?"
"Yes," they all said.
"We could practice in there!"
"But didn't it get completely ruined in the second war, because of the fiend-fyre?" said Scorpius. My enthusiastic smile melted.
"Oh... That's right... I completely forgot about that.. I'm sorry..."
"Oh, that's okay, I'm sorry too, I didn't mean to ruin anything for you," Scorpius said.
"No, that's okay. I should have remembered."

"But it could work! Who knows? I mean, it could have rebuilt itself, that room is mysterious, and with this amount of time..." said James in a try to cheer me up. "Thanks" I said to him in my brain. He really was kind.
"Why not! said Rose."It's worth a try!"
"We could sneek out of the Common Room at night! We could meet like two o' clock!" said Scorpius.
"That's a great idea!" I exclaimed. "Let's do that!"
"Yeah!" the three persons before me said.
"SHHH!" said Madame Pince from behind a book shelf. "Sorry," we said and she walked away, but this time, as soon as she was gone we started laughing.

We then put the books back where we found them, then left the library more enthusiastic than ever.
It was a Saturday morning in mars, the sun was shining and I went off to lunch with a great smile on my lips, together with my Gryffindor family and once again I had that wonderful feeling in my chest, the feeling that...
All was well.

Så, det var det! Hoppas det var tillräckligt bra för att make up for my long abstence from Mugglarportalen. Jag tycker i alla fall att det är väldig skönt att skriva igen!! Glöm inte att lämna kommentarer, för jag älskar feedback!! Jag ska snart lägga upp nästa kapitel - lovar! Vi hörs snart!!
//Er vän, Lily Mihami

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1 nov, 2013 16:49

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Jättebra, små grammatiska fel men inget man stör sig jättemycket på.

https://www.mugglarportalen.se/images/proxy.php?q=http%3A%2F%2Foi47.tinypic.com%2Fpvwy8.jpg Alltid Redo. Läs min FF "Den bortglömde marodören"

3 nov, 2013 10:05

Lily Mihami
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Tackar!!! Nytt kapitel kommer ikväll (för jag ska till Boda borg nu...!) !!! Så... Ja, vi får se hur det blir med vid-behov-rummet!
Undrar också vad de grammatiska felen är?? Kan du skriva dem istället för att bara påpeka?? Så att jag kan förbättra mig menar jag. Men nu måste jag gå. Hejdå!!

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3 nov, 2013 10:27

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Superjättebra!!!! (Läste igår med glömde att kommentera!)

Du skriver superbra! Och du behöver inte stressa eller be om ursäkt för jag finns alltid kvar här och bevakar.

3 nov, 2013 10:44

Lily Mihami
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Åh herregud, tack så mycket!! Du anar inte hur mycket det betyder för mig!! Som sagt, nytt kapitel ikväll!

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3 nov, 2013 11:03

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Jättebra! SUPER!!

3 nov, 2013 14:34

95mas
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every one (everyone) concentrating so hardly (hard) on what we were reading that the .book shelf (bookshelf) behind us could have fallen down without us noticing a thing.

https://www.mugglarportalen.se/images/proxy.php?q=http%3A%2F%2Foi47.tinypic.com%2Fpvwy8.jpg Alltid Redo. Läs min FF "Den bortglömde marodören"

3 nov, 2013 15:24

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every one (everyone) concentrating so hardly (hard) on what we were reading that the .book shelf (bookshelf) behind us could have fallen down without us noticing a thing.

Oj, tack! Men 'everyone' skrivs faktiskt ihop! (Fast no one skrivs förstås med särskrivning)... Fast jag håller med om 'book shelf'... Skrev på mammas telefon och den ändrade vad jag skrev... Men nu måste jag fortsätta köra för jag har haft en tillräckligt lång rast! Kapitel kommer ikväll! Hejdå!

"Join the Dark Side, we have Light" -Wait, what?

3 nov, 2013 15:43

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Oh my frikkin god! Sååå bra! Bevakar denna underbara ff

min profilbild är phil lester för han är very cute, ok

3 nov, 2013 17:09

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Oh my frikkin god! Sååå bra! Bevakar denna underbara ff

Tack så mycket!! Här kommer nytt kapitel! Jag skrev det igår och sparade på min telefon, men hann aldrig lägga upå det, så..
PS. Var beredda på att det kommer vara lite korta meningar, som "Jag går. Mina ben skakar. Jag tar boken. Håller pärmarna mellan mina händer." Typ så. För det är en dröm och jag vill skilja på drömmar och verklighet. Kommer även skriva drömmar i nutid istället för dåtid (som i Vargbröder om någon har läst den serien). Men... Nu börjar vi!!

Chapter 16 -- The Lion and the Snake

A corridor. A dark corridor. I walked there alone, every step I took echoed, came back to me from the walls. Questions in my head. "Where am I?" I didn't know. "What am I doing?" Had no clue. "Who am I?" I had forgotten long ago. I stopped. Something was moving in the dark by the walls. "What-- who are you?" I raise my wand, automatically. A... wand? What is a wand? How did it end up in my pocket? Can I use it? The thing moves again. "Expelliarmus!" I shout and point the wooden stick where the sound came from. A flash of red light comes out of the tip of it. "Expelliarmus"? What does that even mean? I feel a pain in my head, so big that I can't even stand. I feel my legs shaking and before I know it I'm down on the floor, holding my head in my hands, shaking in a way I didn't even know was possible. I scream. My scream echoes loudly. In my head a picture appears, a thought, no, a memory... A computer. "Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets--from my POV". What's that? A hand scrolling down the page... I read. "'Expelliarmus!' Snape shouts and soon the famous Gilderoy Lockhart is lying there like a doll made of fabric. I laugh. Loudly. Then walk out of the room. Hahaha! Lockhart's so stupid!"

I return to reality. My head feels okay again and I stand up, even though my legs were still kind of weak. I look down on my body.
Nothing had changed. Except for one thing... The jeans and t-shirt I wore had mysteriously disappeared. Instead I was wearing a black, long... Thing. A skirt, shirt, sweater, tie, long stockings, black shoes... Then it just pops up in my head. It's a Hogwarts robe. I don't know how I know, I don't even know what Hogwarts is, but I'm sure. I see black smoke appear in front of me, coming together as one, becoming a big serpent in green and silver... A real snake, not just made out of smoke. It's coming closer to me as I run. It's so much faster than me. I trip and fall and I feel so weak, I can't move. This is not a normal snake, no, it's at least 20 feet tall, just the upper part that's holding up the head, getting ready to attack me. I turn around. I look into the eyes. My eyes are teary, because I hold them open for so long, but I still refuse to look away or even blink. Then, when it's going to bite me I hear a lion. It roars loudly. Then I see it. It runs towards me and the giant, venomous, evil snake. Really, a lion too? But instead of attacking me, it scratches and bites the tail of the snake. The lion is not bigger than any normal lion. But still it attacks that serpan to save me. Or maybe it just wants me for itself? Anyway, I feel grateful to the lion. Then it jumps up, scratches the basilisk-like creature in the face and it disappears in green and black smoke, just like it was made.
The lion comes to me and licks me in the face. Then it takes the top of my robe in its mouth and throws me on its back. It runs, kills all the dark creatures from the corridor that tries to stop us. Then we come to a forest, not a dark, scary one, a happy, wonderful one. Then the trees stops following us and we are on a place with a blue sky, green long grass and flowers. There he, the lion, puts me down carefully. The grass is soft and I fall asleep. When I wake up he's licking my face. When he sees that I'm awake he stops and... Talks. He really talks. Well, his mouth is not moving, the voice is coming from all directions, but I know it's him, his eyes... They just make me sure. The voice says:
"Lily. You don't have to feel like you don't belong anywhere anymore. You don't have to be sad. Or afraid. Not now. Not tomorrow. Not any time, ever. You have found a home. You're free. You don't need to wander around in that corridor of darkness anymore. You're home." He does not have the deep voice I would imagine a lion would have. It was a light voice, young, like some one in my age, I knew how old I was again and I recognised the voice. And I realise that the lion is not as old as I thought at first. But then it becomes older again.He puts his paw on my forehead and I remember. I remember everything.
"Lily." That familiar voice...
"James."
"Yes."
"You're... A... You saved me--"
"--Lily."
"Huh?"
"Follow me." He runs into the forest. I get up and run after him.
"Lily."
"Lily.
"Lily."
His voice keeps coming to me, but then starts to fade out and turn into another voice..
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"Lily!" Rose stood at the side of my bed, shaking me.
"Oh, wake up already!"
I groaned and waved my hands so that she couldn't come close to me and turned over.
"Hey!" She slapped me.
"I-i'm awake!" I said, finally waking up, getting out of bed.
"Let's go! It's almost 2 am!"
"S-sure.."
I got up. "Brr! It's cold!"
"Take a robe and a pair of slippers !"
"I don't have any of those."
"Really? Well.. Then.."
"It's okay, alright, let's just go."
"Um, okay then, come on then..."
"Yeah.. Let's go!"


wore had mysteriously disappeared. Instead I was

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4 nov, 2013 09:07

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