In the deep blue ocean(PRS)

Some sailors are out on the big blue Ocean they are out and fishing. A young sailor named Matthew Wilson is not amused being with this crew. But he didn't know what was in his future. A beautiful woman with gills and fins are lurking deep in the water.

prs med Fairy Tale

blir det bra ?

Det blir bra C;

Okey bra ^^

Name: Matthew Wilson
Age: 18
Likes: singing, watching the water and tasty food.
Hates: working, people who gives him orders
Personality: Calm, curious, always talks about how beautiful somethings are.
Family: Logan (dad) Maya (mom)
appearance: (will get a picture soon)

Name: Meredith
Age: 18
Likes: singing, looking at land and watching sailors.
Hates: rules, bossy people, learning new things.
Personality: she is mischievous and love breaking rules. She is not yet allowed to go above sea level, wich she does. She loves watching sailors.
Family: her pod
Appearance:

Jag börjar ^^


the large fishing boat with the name Terfuna II was sailing on the big blue ocean. all people on the ship was working hard everyone except one boy. It was Matthew. He is not the person who works he is more like a person who likes to leaning against a wall and just watch the beautiful water reflect the sunlight or the moonlight depending if it is day or night. the boat stopped in the middle of the ocean and the sailors dropped down their fishing net in the water. Matthew watched the other sailors working. the sun was in the sky and the heat was so hot that almost no one could bear.
"Matthew you are suppose to work not watching the others" screamed a long man with a big beard.
"sorry but I don't wan't to" says Matthew with a smile
"you are hopeless" says the man with a sigh.

(Får jag komma med lite kritik? Cx)
Meredith was bored. She had nothing to do. The young mermaid just sat on a rock in her room and comed through her hair with a shell. She took a deep breath and started to swim up to the surface of the water. Meredith knew she wasn't allowed so, but the temtation of the lovely sun was unbarable. She loved sitting on a rock, feeling the sun touch her bare skin and singing. As she swam, she thought about the sailors. The beautiful things with sticks they swam with. But they didn't swim, she thought, they did something she could not understand. She did not like the idea of killing them, but she loved watching them.

When she reached the surface she looked up. At the blue sky. It was lovely. She sat on the rock she always sat at, and started to sing. She sang to the ocean and the sky, smiling at it.

(um visst ^^)
The sailors started to drag the fish net up to the surface. They had got allot of fish that was floundering in the net.
"hey boys this place is like a goldmine lets stay here for the night."says one of the oldest sailors.
"the others looked up at the sky and noticed that the sun would vanish in the horizon soon.
"in 2 hours it will be night "said the bearded man.
"hey Matthew its time for you to work swab the floor would ya?"says a small man and trows a mop to him. Matthew new that he didn't have a choice so he started to work.

(Är en person lång så heter det tall. Och om du skriver i dåtid så är det said och inte says. Förlåt om jag är irriterande)
Meredith's heart stopped when she saw the boat. It was really near her little rock. Terrified, the mermaid jumped into the water. Even more afraid of what she saw. Large nets were lowerd in the water. Angry of what she saw, Meredith swam closer to the net, and with a sharp rock she set all the fish in there free. She smiled and swam up to the surface. The mermaid watched the men with intrest, hoping that they don't spot her.

(okej har lite dyslexi bara )

The sailors was busy. They where talking and joking and laughing while Matthew was doing his work.
Matthew looked out to the ocean again but he got surprised over what he saw. It was a mermaid.
Matthew stared at her forgetting about his work.
she is so beautiful thought Matthew to himself.
He tried to get a closer look.

(Förlåt)
Meredith looked on the boat. And then she saw him. He was looking at her. The man was very beautiful, and she could not help but smile. Before she came to her senses. What was she doing? She waved at the man and swam away.